Comments : Mr. Corporate America

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awesome job love. Words don't even describe, even if they could, I'm pretty speechless. This is perfection :-). The second/last stanza are definitely my favorite. Really catchy. I might end up running around in circles singing it. *nods* Anyways....like I said, this is awesome, amazing, outstanding, incredible, breath-taking, ect. ect. :-). You're so talented m'love. EEEE> Love you tons like cinnammon buns [only more] :-). Take care. xoxoxox

    Love always,
    YW, Mortie.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Great poem. You did a great job on it. Cool job.
    ~FD