Nicely done, 5/5

This was amazing! Such emotion. I loved:

I don't remember,
anything that I've done...
I know I hurt you,
I never meant too...

That was just brilliant! So much intensity. Just lovely like you My dear.

-Jennifer.

It's amazing just like all your others. I especially loved this part :

"I don't remember,
I am forever left to try...
a story tries to unfold,
its all I see in my eye... "

5/5 none to less..

*> : PainOfOne

Everything about it seems to completely fit the entire piece. The word choice and their wording and the flow...very good. Each piece was great but I find-
I think I told you to run,
but you chose to stay...
Our bond lies in the sun,
you shoulda ran away...
-to be a more cool part. Great job. This is and excellent poem.
~The Bleeding Child~