*tear* OMG THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! (sorry if i accidently posted this comment twice) you are very talented... this poem deserves nothing less then 5 and it deserves to be at the top of the top rated poems... well done =D

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Sobx sobx....wat a poor girl...its a nice poem~

Really excellent write I read it the other day and agen today I liked it soo much Tis is amazingly well structured and written keep it up please comment and vote on some of mine xx

Wow that was really good. it was very sad. what made you write something like that.? was it a personal experience or just something you came up with? if you get a chance plze read and comment on my poems it would really mean alot! thanx

Hey, WOW, that is a really great poem, it was really touching and makes me think about some things. Listen if you ever need anyone to talk to, ill be right here to listen. ill have to look at some of your other poems. Do you think you could look at some of mine too? thanks, ...Emles

Wow, that poem was soooo great! your one of the best writers ive ever come across
--josh

Wow....this is a really good poem....keep up the good work

Omg girl. this was really good. well worth the time it took. keep writing, i want to see more of our stuff.

-silvershade
a.k.a. Tanya
4 ever & 4 always

Wow you wrote that!? It's fantastic! I really felt the girls pain and all. Please read, vote and comment mine. THANK YOU!

Wow..that really sad but its a really good poem..keep up the good work! 5/5

Wow...wow...wow...this is absolutely amazing...you are extremely talented...and once again wow...this nearly made me cry... i read it over and over...i no alot of people have asked u but...is this poem about u...

WOW .....................DAMN GRIL THAT WAS FRICKEN AMAZING....i almost started crying........it kinda remninds me of my father......wow keep up the good work girl ......come check out sum of mine.......KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

much love....XotaeyannaXO

Omg....this is very good...and soo sad.. you've got a great way of rhyming!!!don't worry about how long it is... if ppl are serious about reading..they won't care how long it is :-P

Your excellent- is that true? hit me back !!! asl

That was really good!

Oh my god it made me cry you have great talent please read mine

Very sad and intruiging. I'm sorry if this happened to you. Great read though. You're talented.

That was great that keep up the great work luv jeni x

Wow, thats deep, but is is amazing... i am speachless...5/5, but i would have liked to give you more

Wow, that's amazing!!!! keep writing!!! you defenetly know how!