Well that had a lot of emotion and it rhymed well... i havn't checked out your other stuff yet, so i don't know what you mean by saying they're crap, but i'll go check them out soon...

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

This is an amazing poem, and i haven't read your others yet.. but judging this one, your others cant be that bad.. this one made me laugh in a good way. Great work :) 5/5

Got to start off saying that this was really great. i didn't say i hate ur poems. and i didn't say all that just to be a b i t c h. i just want to exspress how i feel. sorry if i hurt ur feelings. but hey at least i gave u some good inspiration on what to write. i really like it...even tho u dissed me in the poem(yah-i'm famous!)j/k i apologize. keep up the good work.

I like it it is great keep it up

Haha babe that was funny, you are a good rhymer and never let anyone think your bad!!

Keep smiling beautiful

sarah xxoo

Wow i love how you express your feelings through poems maybe we could chat a little bit i know what your going through

I LIKE THAT...I THINK YOU CAN RHYME...DON'T LISTEN TO THOSE PEOPLE.. THEY JUST WISH THEY COULD RHYME LIKE YOU...

Wohoo!!
great poem u have
i cant believe people said that
i mean i checked out ur poem frm the discussions and u rele great!!
dunt give a damn about what those peeps say.. they just most prolly have nth better to do.. lol
keep up ur good work
ur in my favs hunn =)
peace!

Wow i really liked that. it was great i didnt think it was bad at all. dont listen to others cause it dont really matter what they say like my great grandma use to tell me and now i tell others. as long as u try ur best and put ur heart in to it. then its good. even if it is just a bunch of words thrown together. anyways lota of luv and huggs and keep up the good work....luv ya missy

Its ok, i thought it was funny. Stuff like that really doesnt really offend me. When i read these poems after i right them i think the same thing.(in case u were wonderin how i did it on my other poems is just bang the keyboard and do spell check and make sentences. I like my nonsense poems (not this one, this one accually makes sense) because they make people laugh or in case of some people, make them fustrated at the world for being so idiotic. Im sorry but ya'll guys are gullible. Nobody is that stupid to right poems like that.except me

Ur WhAtEvEr,
JaNeAn

I LIKE YO POEMS..
HEHE..
NICE POEM THO