I feel what elopes you

Wow... thats really really deep. i no the feelings... i feel for you hey. good poem btw...
love emles

BEAUTIFUL!!! loved it, u didnt lose ur inspiration.... 5/5
xxx gothictorture

I loved it . as u sed i related so much to it

Luv Lj

I loved it hunnie it was awsum

Good poem neil i can totaly relate to it....anyways i put you in my favories so i can always read your poems tehe...love ya keep yer head up
cherry

Thats good and you are angel luv ya
¤Elisha¤

Very nice

Your poems are very very good and you have a way of writing that is unique.

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This is a ver good poem welll done neil

This is a very good poem, expressed in a effective way

I really like the 2nd stanza!! great poem
take care

That was really good. i sumtimes wish i wouldnt ever get hurt but it helps to know there are better things

This poem fuking rules dude.Keep up the good sheet.

AWWW!!! Hunny I can relate to how this feels... Keep up tha good work... Love ur big sis, Peta xoxo

Wow this was really sad...bravo! many sad poems dont make me sad but this one did! good job! keep it up!

You are soooo awesome!!! I love your poems!!!! I love it love it love it!!!!
you know it took me about 450000 times to try to spell the word poem because of the fact that my key board is MESSED up.

love it!!!

love,
~alissa

Nice poem "astig" it was so deep even it is short keep it up man