Wow.. thats an amazing poem, its made me cry.. im so sorry if this happened to u.. i kno its hard but stay strong.. realli good write.. keep it up xxx (ps:if u ever wana tlk.. send me a message n il give u my addy) xxx

Great job!! Very sad.. I am so sorry that this happened!! I hope your alright!! Hang in there!! If you ever need to talk..i am here!! Keep writing!! 5/5

That is such a sad story but such a good poem. You did a good job writing it. I'm sorry for you lose though.

I am soo sorry 4 ur loss. although ur probably sick of ppl saying that. if u loved him lk u do, then he loves u more than u could ever no. gd luck! and stay strong! gr8 poem tho. xxx

WoW...this is a very deep and sad poem im sorry for your loss