I loved that poem. It was beautiful and your rhyming was excellent.

Awww. that is such a sweet poem...I wonder did it really happen or is it just a poem????comment on mine...read questions....and comment please.
SHAWNDA

Thats really good you can ryhme and everyrhing i liked the part at the end...

Thats such a good poem. your a great writer. let it take you places.

I love the twist at the end ...i thought it qas a dream and i was like ah man ...but it really is a great poem ------Bobbi Jo -----

Wonderful poem! man all ur poems are so great! if u keep writin u could make like a book or somthing, well even if its not a book i think u should seriously trying to get one or more of ur poems published. maybe like in a magazine or something. anyway it was really great. keep writin im really enjoying them

It was a very beautiful poem. You have great talent!

Matthew-
This is the one of the best poems i have ever heard and i have read alot of your other ones...WOW they are really good....you have a gift i would like to know more about you....so either you can e-mail me at JBKN_07@hotmail.com and talk to me and tell me a little about how you wirte soo good!...

Wow matthew this is a very good poem!i loved it!great job!!!

This poem came from the heart, I know because only those can touch you there.

That was excellent you are amaizingly talented keep up

AH!!! i cnt get over how good you are at writing ..ur like a really kick ass writter..keep it up..
stay chill
lizz

AHHH SHOOT!! Talent. That's all that i can say and can i rub some off u if i may? LOL

Bravo

Very very good!!! it made alot of sence!!

~shanny~

OMG THAT'S BEAUTIFUL!
YOU HAVE AN AMAZING TALENT!!
<3 Nessa

Wow that was Amazing!!! very beautifully written!