Comments : Shaking She Takes The Knife

  • Its very emotional and just very meaningful. Its definatly amazing! Keep writting!

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Amazing write. Shows a lot of emotion and depth. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I totally loved this poem hun. Each line was packed with so much emotion. I could see it in my head. It was a gr8 write 5/5!

    *eLiZaBeTh*

  • I know how this feels
    the only reason my parents care is because they want somthing perfect to show of. im never going to be perfect.
    great poem!
    you have done a great job! love mel