by Tammy
|
Wow Bill!! That was just beautiful . |
by Ann Stareyes
|
Great write, Bill. Your thoughts and feeling expressed just superb, the wording and the flow great... |
by Katie
|
Wow! This is an awsome poem! I love how well it flows. It has a great message and not a single rhyme sounds forced. Great job! 5/5! Keep writing! |
|
Bill, |