That was beautifully written... sweet thoughts and ourstanding lines...
loved it..
keep writing... ;)

Love,
Ipsita

Excellent, I love to see this type of poem, I believe it brings across the message with so much clarity, I'm really impressed and the message is surely one we have all wished to convey, marvelous.

I loved that poem and i think its cool how u can write like that! check out some of mine if u will please.

Beautiful. I loved how every single line fit and how they all started with the same words "I am sorry" take care and nice job.

Great poem I loved it and the ending was really good to tie it all up once again great job

Very nice poem.Just like me and my ex.I wish he had told me he was sorry.......
Thanks for commenting on my poem.5/5 keep up the good work.

Sorry....but I have to give you 5/5 for this poem....great work.

Hey sourav,
that was really brilliant.
it was unique.
I really liked the way
you wrote it.
thanks for your comments.
I really appreciate that.
take care,
marjan

Wow i really like this poem, ive tried to do simular and they are quite hard to do 5/5 ;)

That was great remember when i told u some poems cant be put into words well this is one!!! its great but i want to tell u one thing dont ever be sorry for sayin how u feel and acting how u feel!!! ~bye~

Wonderful poem, very well written, you have a wonderful talent,
ps....thankyou for the comment, it realy meant a lot!
take care
xxx

Excellent yaar! i really loved it. so many feelings......... this shows that somewhere we hav something in common. well done.
wanna read more of urs. i give a 5
luv, bharti

Excellent poem here......really a sweet one. wish someday my BF says all these things to me.....LOL!!! well keep writing,
nandini

Awe..i love the way u ended it, the last 2 lines...

<3 Aly

Wow the words i'm sorry throughout the piece was excellent. drilled it into us. and very clever not to start with i'm sorry for the last line but still have it in there as an after taste that we will always remember.

very very powerful. loved the word choice and how the words flowed easily onto the next line. :)

5/5 David