Comments : My Sister

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh but you are an angel JJ...yes us humans make mistakes, as I'm sure you have done, but the angels in heaven have as well, therefore you are still an angel! I look up to my big sis Eirisa as much as your sister does you! I hope she doesn't feel that way though because she is the world, my sunshine, my angel as well! Great write!
    ~CHelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    This is a great write. i'm very impressed with it, your so honest about not being the perfect person. everyone needs someone to look up to and you seem like a good person to look up to. your sister will learn of your mistakes but will love you the same. it's just a beautiful poem.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    JJ,
    A beautiful piece written for your little sister. I'm sure in her eyes you are an Angel and I'm sure you are. No one is perfect, we all have our flaws...Its truly whats in the heart that counts.

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    JJ...
    This was so heartfelt ....
    It reminded me so much of my two sons .. One is 13 and the other is 5..
    My 5 year old walks in every footstep of his older brother ....He admires him and looks up to him not only as his big brother but as his security .....

    In the eyes of admiration and love there are no flaws ... Your little sis obviously loves you with all her heart as you do her ... and love conquers all .... even imperfections

    This write tugged at my heart strings ....