That was really sad. i know the feeling of hating your dad and how mad they make you and no matter how hard you try, words still cant express it fully. brilliant poem 5/5...take care, love always liv xx
Wow... this poem... I can't even express how much it touched me. My dad beats me... and my best friend's guardians used to beat him too. I know how hard it is to stand up to a father... especially one who uses verbal abuse. If you ever wanna talk, my email address is firstname.lastname@example.org. *hugs* Bye...
WOW that is a GREAT poem is it real?? if it is im SOO SORRY that you had to go threw all that i hope its over with and the sun of a b**** is in forever n you have moved on with your life much love to you always alana
God reading this poem is liek reading something right from my soul...my dad "beat" me once, I moved in with my mom and older brother. Since then I've cried many tears and made many scars. Absolutely incredible poem.