Nice poem and it sounds like if you've been thrue a lot. once again, nice poem

This poem sounds so much like what my best friend is going through. so very sad 5/5

Beautiful poem and somewhat relevant to me...cept i just hate my dad even tho hes here...thanx for the comment and ill write more just not as much is all...im loosing the battle i hope you win...but dont worry ill be fine...
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I like dat....i like how u worded it!!! great poem!! im doin ok i hope ur fine too ~*~

Wow.

Dont do the worst to yourself for mistakes others make .Wise to look who is surrounding you giving you much affectionate ,whos always been there for you ! Remember its not your loss but your fathers. One day he'll wake up from his confusion of a life and regret for neglecting you ,wise choice be strong stay healthy ,be a fighter not a runner .Hope all ends well tc hugz*