Comments : Waterless tears

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Amazing poem..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    Another good piece, those tears can feel so real and you are so convinced they are there, then there is nothing, I know the feeling, you described the feeling very well I think, the format and structure of the poem was good and the flow wasn't disrupted anywhere which kept me interested in reading the next line, good poem, well done to you...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I liked this one...it was unique....nice job 5/5 luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by miracle

    It is so beautiful.. i like it so much
    i think i know exactly how you feel
    please comment on my poem too it's means a lot
    keep up the writing, and don't let anyone bring you down
    5/5 that's for sure.

  • 18 years ago

    by fallentears

    Great poem i can really relate to it