This poem is really sweet. Keep it up xxx

Wow, considering that most or all of your poems are about love, i'm guessing you are in love, and boy do you show it. *and if you're not then nvm* keep it up!

Yes i am how could you tell

Whoa. I LOVE it. It's beautiful. I love the bodies entwining, and the caressing skin...ahh, I'm a sucker for this stuff. I love it! Great Job!

5.5.

DFK

Thats really pretty, not a poem, but beautiful words none the less

Not a poem at all but amazing work of putting these words in but mmm very deep i would also have to agree with Sarah on that. You did an amazing job i'll give you a 5. keep it up. keep on writing love always and forever

Good but need s a structure. It's decent though when it comes to what you're trying to say

O........M.........G
This poem was AMAZING
This is my facorite one.
You did extremely well on this
LOVE IT

♥Mz.Raven

A lovely poem of a lovely fantasy I would have laid it out a little diffrently a couple of short stanzas I belive would have made it flow better.

A lovely poem of a lovely fantasy I would have laid it out a little diffrently a couple of short stanzas I belive would have made it flow better.