Comments : Pain u gave....

  • 18 years ago

    by supriya

    Gud!!!!one only will understand this if one has gone thru it......

  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Still I seem to be trying,
    Even though i am dying...

    These two lines holds lot of meaning and pain....Even though sometimes we know we are fighting against a lost cause,our heart still goes after our deepest desires and dreams...
    And what i meant by saying u a typical indian girl,was that i liked the way u reavealed urself and good to know u r proud to be an Indian,which every indian should and must be...Neway,nice poem...
    Take care and keep smiling always...FIVE>>>

  • 16 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Welldone Very Nice Poem ..... ..... :)