Brilliant imagery and extremely vivd description of a topic which isnt altogether clear in todays haze of reality. I really liked your style of writing and the way it flowed, A small touch of genius somewhere in there im sure, keep it up, I look forward to reading more,
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Omigoddess this was amazingly .odd. i dunno . it was cool but the rhyme scheme(sp?) threw me off. it didnt really -flow-

Well i feel stupid after Foresaken....lol