Aww josi!!! im at school...thankyou so much for the comments you have absolutely no idea how much they mean to me..and how much you do. i miss you so much!!!:'(!!!
i'll write to you tonight.
love ya heaps x x x
PS: i'm sorry i can't help not believing my own words..hypocritical i know.

Btw that song was absolutely awesome. keep writing x x x

Really amazing! I loved the line
So here's my chance to start out new,
without the weight of missing you

Sounds perfect. I'd love to hear that sung. I've tried writing songs, and find it really difficult, so great job!

Really beautiful! I love it... your really talented, I've tryed writing songs to.... It's really hard to find the right words... GOOD JOB :D!

Hey,

WOW i luv ur song. I sing too, and i think its pretty hard to write songs...but you obviously are a natural. Maybe you could give me some tips. Bye!
Keep Writing!!!!
~A~

Hey i really really luv this!!!! i would love to hear it sung, the words flow so well togather and i no it would sound awsome wiv music!!! good job on this and all ur other poems and songs!!!
Luv DarkCookie