Great poem, that was very nicely written... keep it up

*jackie*

Very good poem...I barley can write a good rhyming poem, but u do it nicly! Keep writing!

Wow
that was awesome i loved it
loved the flow of it WOW
keep it up

plz read n comment on mine thnx
andrea

Dnt go darling, your beautiful and you help me with alot..you helped me today..thnx for that

great poem

-angel-