Comments : Life's One True Performance

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    I am the puppet
    Pull my strings
    I move with no emotions
    unaware of things

    Kinda popped into my head .If you like it feel free to use it .
    You have a great base for your poem started though .Good luck

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Life is the real show that must go on.
    Backstage we decided what face to play.
    So true when the curtain is pulled you
    cant go back. Your in the spotlight for all
    to see so do your best to be you or will you
    deceive.

    Excellent read indeed short but sweet.
    It says a lot about life in six lines,
    Write on.