Thats a very good poem, god i wish i could write poems lol, anyway, keep them coming.
Love Stephen

Hey Stephen,
Thanks for your support.. I'm kind of new with writting poems.. So thank you for your nice comment.
-Ashley

Yup yup goooood.

Wow, awsome poem. well written. I loved it.

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Keep up the good work sis .. : ) i like all ur poems

Its good.but its confusing too,maybe its just my slow brain.lol.i dunno.keep writing...

So deep...true...wow, i like it....wow, cool!

Thank you for your comments,
Gald you liked it
-Ashley

Wow, tht was so cool and sad! loved it! 5/5
Becca x