This was awesome, and so true... Anyway, excellent job!

-Taylor

Aww it made me feel all shivery, its so true nd i totally kno how u feel!!! wicked poem, rele rele good, well done baby xxx

Very good use of words to describe a nightmare but also great in the way people could relate to it as another situation other than a nightmare. Keep it up xXx

Good, its more dark than sad though, but still good.
Brad