Well welll written with a well presented message. it is true that many people are judged upon how they appear rather than who they are, and this should not be the case. a fewof the lines seem to interupt the over all flow of this poem, but it always recovers very quickly so they do not weaken it overall.

5/5

Great job .. even thought its not my favorite of yours its still good.. 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen!~*

ANGIEEEEE! This was awesome! Theres so much truth in it. You really did a great job on this piece! 5/5

`taleeeeeeeeeeeee xx

P.S See you in AA Meeting =p taha

I liked this, it's so true, and the meaning is very important, and a lot more people need to see this as well. Overall, i enjoyed this thouroughly.