Hey! Wow . . . this is a good poem! It's my favourite out of the ones you wrote too! Good job . . . thanks for rating my poem . . . it means the world to me! 5/5 . . . as always......Keep writing!
*Lisa*

Great poem, hope everythings ok, good luck in life

Good job 5/5!

Aweosme poem. i like it. its like a story in a way. ur an awesome writer!

This has so much truth in it. Just a suggestion though, you should seperate this and all of your poems into stanzas...makes it easier to read and interests the reader for longer. nevertheless, an awesome poem!

This is really good. i got a little confused tho..but all together good