Some of it i could relate to, some i couldnt.. good altogether, however, this really didnt bring me back to my childhood, but then again it might just be hard to do that w/ me.. it was good th0,.. to me it sorta ended abruptly,.. i dunn0 if i like that.. but u might have done that on purpose, as childhood seems to end abruptly, or more precisely, seems to never last long enough.. anyway.. although i do think about my childhood and wish to go back, i still maintain my inner child and can be crazy like a lil kid.. that much i'm grateful for.. this is just a comment maybe for your sake, but maybe omit that it is an acrostic poem and see if people realize its an acrostic or are just reminded of their childhood.. i liked it, but i think it could be more vivid and colorized with childhood nostalgia,.. more feeling.. but maybe thats hard to accomplish with an acrostic.. goood job.. 4/5 =O)

EXCELLENT
lol it were great makes you remember :P

Jacs
xxx

That was more sad than funny....If youd excuse me I think im going to go hang myself =(.
But even if im really sad now and gonna go write some depressing stuff.
A really good poem.
Love
Jake

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Nice poem. I really like your poems i comment on a lot of em. great work keep it it. much