I liked the message... there were some technical errors (spelling and punctuation) but there is definately some potential. great work, keep it up. 5/5, great effectiveness~

Car

Where i can say anything in the world
and you wont judge
and
your rare to find
and I'm going to hold onto
can be written better fror example just one word on each
where i can say anything in the world
and you wont judge IT
and
your rare to find
and I'm going to hold onto you
still a great poem though

-_- hey courtney...if you say ur not in love wit this one dude in like 2 days I WILL SMACK YOU! YOU ARE IN LOVE MY FRIEND! REJOICE IN IT! muhahahaha....sorry hinkle is YOURS

Aww thats really sweet