Truly lovely...an excellent peice. You should be very happy this very well written.
faith,
sammi xxx

Great poem . I am not overly sure but does Yeshua mean Jesus in Hebrew , As we would say Jesus in English ? I wasn't to sure .But a very nice poem indeed ! I definately say a 5 ,for your expression was very clear .Great poem

That is beautiful, supurb im like speechless man..ur awesome..keep up ya faith in God

Love in Christ

That was a truely amazing poem you wrote! Look forward to reading more

Wow..! ur poem is so.. beautiful, it touched me very deep in my heart. to tell u that it even made me cry. very beautiful & touching