Really powerful poem. It's sad that things like this happen everyday more and more frequently. If you get a chance look at some of mine.

Woww..that got my crying near the end. its very very very good!

Jeshy stashy loves that tis great =D

Nice power in that one. I can feel the hurt of loosing someone i love. My great grandma died a long time ago and i would love to join her. Keep up the asome work.

Lance

Omg this is really good... hope ur doing alright hun...chin up
luv always smiling oxoxo

Thats sad!!
im sorry if its true
even if its not its sad
but great job !!
i love it !!
5/5

Wow, this is simply fantastic! I can completely relate and you did an amazing job expressing yourself! Excellent write!

Omg, that poem really touced me im so sorry about your mother. 5/5