Comments : Kill me now

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    I love all your poems and your on my favorite list!

  • 18 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    Good poem, i like the way you write:)

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Gr8 poem...it was totally awesome, & thankz for the r/c on my poem, as u can c i returned the favor lol. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MisterScabbedWings

    I like how it ends. Take Care.

    -PG-

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is truly a great piece, with a great ending. The repetition makes the poem lovely and powerful. Keep it up!

  • Really good poem !!
    5/5
    i really liked the last 2 lines

    really effective the way you repeat 'kill me now'
    xx