I really like this alot...I've been there...I feel it is perfect...Honestly
5/5
ash

Wow this poem reminds me of me, and what i actually felt today.... its like im completely obsessed with this guy, and i barely even know him. i think im also just overly emotional.... its like, if he tells me hes going to call me back, and he doesnt, i totally feel so depressed and i dont know why? i shouldnt be, but tahts just the way i am.. im completely obsesed.. i love your poem. it captures the moment, and its like, you took the thoughts right from my head.. good job.... the only part i didnt understand was "Abdandon before its too late
Keep unfaithful and untrue" i dont know why, maybe im just stupid lol.. the part about keeping unfaithful... well thanks for commenting on my poem.... i really appreciated it... your on my favorites too!