Comments : April Night

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Maybeth I don't think I've ever felt someones pain as much as I did in this peice! First and foremost I missed your writing girl! It's been quite some time!
    Anyways, I am so dearly sorry about your friend Maybeth. They say it hurts so much loseing a family member but it hurts a lot loseing a friend as well. You should not blame God girl because he is up their rejoicing with him. I'm not sure why God takes peoples lives at young ages but everything happens for a reason and only God know why. Maybetj my heart is crushed because I can see you hurting and crying and I just wish I could give you a hug sweets and be there for you..at least know your in my prayers..this poem was amazing good job expressing the feelings!! Its great you turn to poetry its a wonderful gift!
    Love ya girl!
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    AWWWW.....This was totally beautiful, and sad . there is nothing more I can really say except that, you have me sheding tears..5/5

    xoxoxo Thanks for voting .