Oh wow. that was really good. well done xx take care

Its really good you really have some talent.keep up the good work!

Sad.. but i enjoyed it ^_^

Wow, you're an awesome writer. this is so heartfelt. I love your rhyme scheme and your word choice. keep it up, it'll get you far!

This reminds me of me and in saying that, this is such a deep poem. So much pain, so few words. And I understand exactley

This is good. i like it