Another good poem:) i have some new ones too if you wanna check them out:) thanks for your comment too!

Wow...brilliant, thanks so so much for the comment, although that wasnt one of my best writes ('',) hehe... anyways... your poetry is amazing, you come up with so many great ideas... keep it up, take care x

You have quite the different style, I love it, you're on my favs now =) Another excellent write, can't wait to see more

You have quite the different style, I love it, you're on my favs now =) Another excellent write, can't wait to see more

Actually you're gonna be the getting tired of hearing this but... I loved this one too.... you're such a great writer... you write like you were 30 years old... (it's a compliment) You are a great poet!

The creativity is really amazing. So much from one song. It shows the beauty of music and what it can make us feel. Sweet. Take Care.

-PG-

Hey this is an amazin poem, i especially like

Claustrophobic
Catastrophic
Silent tears
A demonic creature rears
I cant give in- give in to what?
What this is I know not
Give in to myself- give into madness?
All the sorrow and the sadness

keep writin :D

Forsaken Redemer

xXx

btw, thnx 4 ur comments

Your so talented.... I love how you wrote this one, it's like a song in itself.. keep up your good work... I know you will... =)

It is FABOLUS any way love it keep it up

THIS IS THE BEST POEM IVE READ SO FAR ON THIS SITE... LOVED IT... MYSTERIOUS AND DARK... JUST MY TASTE

Never heard of the song, but loves the poems, im dark to like dark, it got an egde to it,lol. good poem anyway