Ok first off..good poem. it flowed well. for a title...ehh i really dont know. if your in a club type thing post a suggestion...thats what i do. or come up with something that sums up the whole poem like the last few lines. that helps me! anyways sry if im not much help. im not good at titles...4/5

Simply "My Destiny"! excellent poem and i enjoyed read it!

It was pretty good , and has a good flow to it . =) keep writing

I liked it, well done indeed. You've solidified your rhyme, and it shows.