Aw that's a great poem, you're very talented, 5/5

OMG! this one made me cry like alot. my daddy died almost 2 years ago. i rate this poem 5/5 im sry for the way u feel.
Paulette

Wow I can relate to that poem alot

5.5

I can't really give u any critisism cuz I couldn't find anything ;)

A lot of feeling within this poem,.. quite sad actually.. im really sorry about that.. i dont have much to say.. this was obviously specific feelings so u really kinda cant go wrong when writing them, and also, using broken glass as a metahpor for yourself.. very good imagery that i havent really come across before.. that kinda stuff always brightens up poetry.. anyway.. i had a few problems with the flow sometimes.. but it mighta just been me.. all in all a pretty good piece..

Very sad =*(....i'm sorry your dad isn't around....i bet it's hard to deal with....once again, i'm here if you need to talk....this poem is also pretty good, but i agree with drew, the flow was a little off...but i have problems with flow all the time....no worries =) *hugs*

-brittnay-

Hey though i dont know ur life about u and ur dad....im so sry for whatever happened cuz every lil gurl should have their daddy....and tho i havent been as good 2 mine as he has been to me when i read ur comment on my poem Daddys Little Girl... it made me cry and i just wanted 2 let u kno im thankful for that advice ur awsome keep writin me messages....Maybe we can be friends....?? if ya want

Wow yourt very intouch with your feelings i can tell that i wounder thought did your dad leave? i mean theres many things that could of happend. keep up the good work 5.5

Great work raw emotion simple and at its best

I must say its a definate 5/5
beautiful expression of ur intense emotions
am touched
love
amy

Great poem. 5/5
Becky
xoxo

Thanx for the comment and ill try to write properly from now on its just that over here in n.y we right kind of slang even in school we do=)

Good work. There was lots of feeling in this poem and has good form.

I know exactly how you feel...Man I love my dad to death..But GOD do i hate him so much..And i dont know exactly why..

Keep it up! you are a great writer

Very sad, very touching, keep writing such brill poems
love Tara xxx

Great poem and great feelings. keep it up.

Awsome... its hard to express isnt it