Loved it... very simple and to the point. =) Love the ending especially.

I love your last stanza it is so true. I know about that ALL TOO WELL. Overall, this poem ROCKS! I love the way it flows. Great job! 5/5!

I have to agree with every one else you write very well and i will be back

Strong message for a short poem. Simple, well written. Very good.

Oh god this is so horribly true... very good poem

Good poem it flowed nicely, didn't really rhyme much but still flowed well. graet job once again!

Okay so ive read three so far...and they are all SO simple...and I mean one surface poem is okay two is okay but you have to write something deeper then what it is at first sometime...

1 lie, 2 lies, 3 lies, 4
You tell one lie,
Youll have to tell more

that was pretty F'n sweet keep things like that up, i liked that part ALOT!

4/5

Great poem. the ending was very good

This poem has a great message in it about lying and that is it just better to tell the truth in the first place. I think you expressed your opinion on it very well. Keep up the great work.

There couldnt be a more truthful poem in the world... very creative and nice job!!

sammie