This is a cute poem...

O ali! don't worry dear, everyone grows up. but damn i wish they didn't. to stay a child...how beautifull. i liked the poem a lot! it really described ur feelings for her. (annie right?) if i HAVE to critisize...i'd say that you could probably add a little more discriptevness. like...the transition...jeese idk how to put it...well it rocked!