Comments : Darkness ©

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    *jaw drops* wow....georgi, this is amazing....i can really relate.....i love this stanza...

    "The shadows will keep me, hold on to me tight,
    My body is shaking, it wont put up a fight.
    Focused on the hurting, the thing that feels so real,
    Opening up the wounds, that inside refuse to heal"

    briiliant work....just very sad....i'm here if you need anything at all *GIANT bear hug* i love you uber lots!

    -brittnay- ((5/5))
    ==Armidillo Buttkisser==
    *silly b!+ch*

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow...so visual and heartwrenching...
    ah..
    really awesome work hun
    take care xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Super poem. it flows really well and brilliant vocab

  • 18 years ago

    by anastasia

    Omg once again true talent
    5/5
    ill try to comment most of your poems or all

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    WOW! this poem was beautiful. you have a great talent! and thanx for accepting me into the club. its rly nice to know ppl r there for me wen i need to talk! thanx and great work 5/5 XX

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Amazing just plain amazing one of the greatest things I've ever read