Wonderful poem.... it's so sweet.... i don't know how but something in my heart tells me that I can truly relate to this poem........ great write..

Love,
Rim

I don't know what it is with this poem--- i just can't stop reading it.... it brings me something new everytime i read it...
wonderfully written...

Love,
Ipsita

Awsome poem! i loved it! you are definatly talented!

Well done sourav! hey guy i'm also an indian.hoping a good relation with you.keep writing...

I loved this poem. It shows a lot of feelings for her. I also read all your poems and you are a good writer so just continue writing and you'll be better everyday! See you around!

I think your poems are truly unique. i love to read them. I recently have written a few poems and would love your opinion!!!

Hi Sourav,

Its a beautiful heartfelt poem, your words have done full justice to your feelings.
Love is very strong emotion yet irony is in most cases its not understood by the very people we love.
Wish you all the luck and success .

Regards
chavii.

Omg! sooooo good! love it

favorite parts!::

"She is my sun,
She is my moon,
Lonely coolest night,
And hot afternoon" < that was really good relation.

"As stars are getting ready to leave my side,
And the end is very near for another silent night
The sun will be rising to make its claim
Soon another new day will begin for me, with her name." << that was SO adorable ^_^
i bet all the girls that have read this went "awe" just like me! =] and that was a great way to end your poem.

5/5 MOST DEFFINITLY!

~tia