I liked it

I loved this poem, it was really good. keep it up, have a lil bit more confidence bout your writing though. Amie

I can hear your screams
I can see your tears
I can feel your beat
But i can't make you happy

It's nice and well done.
You are great, hope to see more from you, keep it up.

Hey this one is sad & i really know how it feels, my first posted poem was abt it, how it feels to be me..lol

all the best and take care
5/5