Nice job:) this poem really makes you think there is hope and it's nice to see that someone has it :)

can you check out my poem "see what you missed"? that would be great thanks:)

WOW i loved it
so much emotion love it keep it up

love andrea xxxx plz check out my new poems thnx

Woah gr8 poem!! agen v.glad ur m8 is btr n i hope he stays well 4eva

talyho

Wow...excellent!!! im really glad his will to live was stronger than the cancer. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

Hey sorry i havnt commented on poems in a while O_O

This is good it shows that if you have hope and faith good things can happen.

Your flow was great and the poem was well put together..its nice to write it about your friend and if its true im happy you were so lucky.

Good work on this poem xxx

I LoVe iT! keep it up mark ...
God Luv ya.
and God Bless :)

Luv ya, sam xox

Great poem, just thought i check it out.
Keep it up. 5/5

Wow, this is wonderful.
I didn't have access to this site
for a long long time and
your poems were among the
poems I missed so much.
wish you the best,
marjan