Wow, chills man, this is amazing, i think this is my favourite xxxxx

AND WHY HAS NOBODY ELSE COMMENTED ON THIS POEM?????? IT IS STILL MY FAVOURITE I THINK BY FAR XXXXXXXXX

Heehee, well thanku stabby, luv u lots xxx

That is EXCELLENT!!! Wow one of the best I've read on this site. Short but sweet, and to the point.. I like it a lot.. great meaning. Nice write, full points. =) And thanks for the comment.

That was interesting
unique and flowing
i liked it alot
well done