This is really good... ur very talented. thanx for the comments
luv always smiling oxoxo
p.s. ever need to talk im here

I really like this song you have wrote. I also write songs. But anyway this was very good. I really enjoyed reading it. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. Ps your also talented.

Great job, i could definatly see this as a sad slow song

i only lie cause theres no way out
i don't want attention
i just want to hide
no reason to say whats on my mind
it's not for you to know

that was my favorite part great job 5/5