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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Beautiful write! I love the vision of beauty that you so simply see. Many people can't see the little things that make one so beautiful.
    "the door to your soul
    i wish to unlock
    to find whats hidden
    and why its locked" I love this stanza...it shows anticipation and so much love....This poem is so beautifully written. Excellent write!!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    You did an amazing job on this one as well. This poem is very sincere and beautiful. It's nice to see someone who cares so much. Take care.
    > Kiesha