Comments : Not What You See

  • 18 years ago

    by **..Shell..//

    I understood that poem really well.. i can relate to it and i no how it feels to b sitting there and all they do is stare at u wanting to no wats rong but scared to come and ask.. i hate it.. :9 keep it gd..
    my luv
    shellxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Excellent write, m'dear...your every word is a masterpiece to me. Even outside of poetry...it's a wonderful melody to my mind...everything. You're magical like that. I hope everything's okay with you, hun. I can't wait to talk to you again. *Hugs* This poem is exceptional, as your work always is...I know you have potential. I believe in you. Keep your chin up. I'm here for you. xoxox I love you, soooo much more than you think. EEE>

    Love you always my pretty fabulous drumset queen,
    Your pretty pistol.x.