Weird poem. But it was good.
Keep it up :)

That was a great poem i loved it. thanks for commenting mine also. you are a great writer. im gonna try to read all your poems right now. im sure there just as great as this on.keep up the work......luv and huggs...missy

Excellent imagery. Sets the dreariness of the tone very well. Great syntax. Powerful subject. Bravo.

Omg , i love it - so beautifully wrong

Wow stuning and powerfull ... 5 for you hate to think something like that is real the pain the anger so well done