Comments : The ink has stopped flowing

  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Thats sad but good. I love reading your writing.
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by CrimsonRayne

    Very good. u can put life into ur poems... i havent seen many that have done that... 5/5 keep up with the great work.

    ~liz~

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    You painted a beautiful but sad picture with you words...... wonderful job.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Luanne,
    This was truly beautiful and wriiten with perfection. The flow and the words used just made it amazing... You truly have talent. I hate I didn't come across your beautiful work before now...

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Another beautiful piece with such sad undertones! You are a very talented writer. Keep it up~Holly