I too hope you are proven wrong.

Powerful peice and i love it greatly. you have done a beautiful job and i like how it's prove me wrong, it's a very creative poem and unquie i'm certainly glad i took the time to read the peice it speaks truth!

~Jacklyn

Whether you fallow Moses, Mohammad or Jesus Christ,
they were all men of righteousness, who knew the value of life,
lets begin to respect our women, and teach them respect for themselves,
absorb some knowledge, blow the dust off of our book shelves,
replace every gun with a book, every "spliff" with a pen,
every child support cheque with a father, every enemy with a friend,

Loved that part!!! Thuggy you are a terrific writer and I really admire that about you..This poem is exactly how I feel..it's sad that the younger generation sees this and feels this way...you'd think that'd be a wake up call for America and for other nations that we should change because it really is affecting people....Wonderful write Thuggy I really loved this peice!!
Kind Regards,
~Chelzz~

Thuggy,

Very good piece and giving all of us quite allot to think about. Your use and choice of words was perfect.

Regards,

Steve

I wasnt gonna comment on ANOTHER one of ur poems...but as soon as i read this i had 2! i think it would be ur best personally! i really luv it! congrats! luv monique

Wow.i agree 100% ....not only was it a good poem but it gave great advice...........so amazing!