I love how you don't have to even really say how she was wronged. This is the first poem I've ever read with this kind of style I like it. Alot. WoW.

Beautiful!

Oh my gosh, this has to be my favorite poem by you yet, i loved it, ALOT! it was really really good, you did an AWESOME job, 5/5 of course, i'd give you a 10 if i could

I like your style. nice job once again.