Comments : Patterns of Failure in this World Repeating

  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I must say you are VERY talented. im very fond of your style and all your work. You craft everything SO well. This poem was simply captivating, the way it depicst everything beautiful slowly fading and then attributes something such as Prince Charming with such horrible traits is pure genius. Very well written if I do say so myself.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    WOW!!! just WOW! You are one talented person...holy...wow! I loved this poem. Definitely my style of poetry! Just everything about it was great..."Nightmares are coming
    Prince charming riding upon them" LOVED that line...it's just awsome...I wish i could give you 10 5/5...but alas i can only give one! GREAT WRITE!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    *reads it over again* I really like this poem! It's so well written a flows so smoothly!!!! It really made me think. 5/5

    Nice work!